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I danced
in the middle of
the highway
today.

I know, I know!
It was dangerous-
like playing with death
and his many friends.

I apologize,
but this...
it's only
the beginning.
This was a school assignment that we had to do today. Mine turned out...a little too dark. But oh well.

Hope everyone enjoys!

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
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Catsterw Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
Wait... Why is death related to dancing in the hallway?
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passionriter Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In the highway. You know, the large street filled with fast moving vehicles.
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Catsterw Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
*slinks away in shame*

My bad.
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passionriter Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay. I guess they do look kinda similar.
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Leap-of-Faythe Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have to agree with the deviant below me; I loved the voice in this poem! It's not really like any others I've heard, which is awesome, and the fact that I could pick it out so easily even in such a short poem is a sign of real talent. Nicely done!^^ I myself can never write anything worthwhile in school. xP
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passionriter Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much. I'm really glad that my poem stood out to you and I extremely grateful that you like it so much! ^^
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Leap-of-Faythe Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! <3
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
I like the voice in this poem, which really comes through in the first line of the second stanza. :) There's something quite teenage and charming about it. :D
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passionriter Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much! :D
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TheMoorMaiden Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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