in the middle of
I know, I know!
It was dangerous-
like playing with death
and his many friends.
Wait... Why is death related to dancing in the hallway?
In the highway. You know, the large street filled with fast moving vehicles.
I have to agree with the deviant below me; I loved the voice in this poem! It's not really like any others I've heard, which is awesome, and the fact that I could pick it out so easily even in such a short poem is a sign of real talent. Nicely done!^^ I myself can never write anything worthwhile in school. xP
Thanks so much. I'm really glad that my poem stood out to you and I extremely grateful that you like it so much! ^^
I like the voice in this poem, which really comes through in the first line of the second stanza. There's something quite teenage and charming about it.
Keep me on a leash or I might too XD